Organization:
I. Topic Sentence--explain the main idea of your paragraph
II. Middle Sentence
III. Middle Sentence
IV. Middle Sentence
V. Concluding Sentence--explain the main idea of your paragraph
Questions of the day: Describe one time when you went to sledding or skiing. Make sure to write about only one time.
I can remember one great night when I went sledding with my family at Edina High School. My entire family was there along with one of my friends named Johnny Klobe. We went to an enormous hill behind the high school, which has three flights of stairs to the bottom. Our sleds sped down the hill and we could go very far. It was especially fun to make long chains, in which we'd put two or three sleds together, cling onto each others' damp snow-suites and hold on for dear life as we flew down the hill. After whipping down the hill for awhile we would have created a trail. If you kept your
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